Date: 02/02/2016 1:34 PM Title: The New Voyage
Your English is remarkable for a non-native speaker, I think the story comes across well. I liked it in the original and I gladly read it again in the translation. This lightfilled representation of the passing on to a new dimension is heartwarming. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you, angelocustode, for your friendly review. I was happy about it in the German version as well as here in the English version. ;-) I'm glad you like it and my English is good enough. ;-)))) You all made me brave to try to translate one of the other storys to... I'll see... ;-)
Date: 01/31/2016 3:54 AM Title: The New Voyage
This was lovely in its simplicity. A great deal was said in this without being overly wordy. Your English was just fine, so do not worry. I hope writing this piece helped you process your feelings about Mr. Nimoy's passing. (I know writing helped me work through some emotions.) Thank you for sharing this. ~ RK
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm glad to have this page all around Star Trek and Jim/Spock. It' good to have place to share them and I'm happy to "meet" so many people who love the same. ;-) It was a shocking moment to hear that Mr. Nimoy lost his fight, and a friend ask me to wrote a story for him. Here it is and I'm glad you like it.
Date: 01/30/2016 8:58 PM Title: The New Voyage
Your English is very good. There are a few words where I think people might better understand you if you used a similar - and I know that might indeed have been your intention - but even with those few words as they are, it makes sense. So, they are not mistakes. Very well written, translated, and imagined...
Author's Response: Thank you very much, my dear Vulcan Lover. That's very kind from you. Thanks to my English-Translator... ;-)))) My Wordbook is not so new... and many words I learned here, are not in this book...