Date: 12/17/2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bist du ganz sicher, daß du nicht weiter schreibst..
Sie ist wie ein Anfang und der ist toll.
Sorry ahead of time if I answer your question incorrectly. I think when I attempted to translate this, it came out wrong.
i'm thinking about writing more but I need to see if I have inspiration to do so and figure out an idea of where to take the story. But yes, it's a stand alone that is suppose to be a teaser.
Date: 12/14/2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is beautiful! J'adore! There are 2 small errors of parsing would have detected that your Beta. Everything else is perfect, except for the fact that he finished. I want to know what happened next! Finish this and turn it into a book. It is very necessary to my happiness! Tres Bon!
Thank you for the review! I'll probably run this through my normal beta once I get through the time crunch that is the holidays. However if you point me to the errors in phrasing, I'll make corrections.
As for your request... I'll seriously consider it!