Date: 11/16/2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
And thank you for being one of the authors who doesn't have to write about sex all the time - Spock and Kirk and their friendship and fondness is something which very few writers explore and I thank you for doing so! This is wonderful!
I dunno, I kind of like the sex, or at least the romance. :) But Kirk and Spock's friendship is amazing even without a romantic element, so I get wanting to see more fic that focuses on that aspect of their relationship.
Date: 11/16/2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
THIS WAS A WONDERFUL FICLET! I JUST LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE SPOCK AND KIRK! NEVER STOP! THIS FIC DESERVES 10000 STARS and more for being amazing!!!
Thank you! This was really nice to read. :)
Date: 11/16/2015 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't usually like first person, or current narrative - whatever the proper term is - it escapes my mind - but I like your writing more often than not, and the subject, the picture conjured up through clever infusion of atmospheric picturesque writing, it kept me reading. I'd've liked it even better if there was some Pre-Slash or Slash, but this is CUTE, and manages to be pretty - even without the helping hand of sexy (and therefore, pretty!) thoughts!!! Well done!
Thank you! I think you mean present tense? I know not everyone likes it, but I find it easiest to write. I'm glad it didn't put you off the fic, and that you like my writing.