Reviews For Unraveling
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Reviewer: silvertoekee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

What a different take on Jim's experience with his memories of Tarsus.  It was a nice change seeing him deal with the trauma and having to be on that planet again.  I loved how we got to see flashbacks of his grandfather Tiberius and what he did for Jim & his family.  The sweaters were a nice touch and I adored Sam's personality as the caring older brother.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this detailed comment! It means a lot to me!

Reviewer: WeirdLittleStories Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

What a wonderful story this is!  I'm impressed with the expert way you balanced the light and the dark and with the psychological sophistication.  It's a rare author who handles serious PTSD as well as you do here, showing its seriousness and its devastating impact without descending into mawkishness or melodrama.

A thousand kudos for this excellent work!


Author's Response:

My goodness, thank you so so much! This comment really means so very much to me. I try really, really hard to keep things believable as well as enjoyable, so I deeply appreciate that feedback. 

A thousand thank yous for your lovely reviews!!

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is an amazing idea for the prompt which could have been seriously cheesy. I think you have caipry red the idea of a journey in progress and the bittersweetness of loss overall a fic which is strong and without an ounce of cloying goo that would not have done justice to the prompt.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm always trying to avoid cloying goo and am never sure about my success rate, so I appreciate that very much. Thank for reading and for this thoughtful comment!

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really sad but really wonderful

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! 

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thank you for this great story.
I enjoyed it very much.
It was like looking a film and I didn't could stop reading.

Author's Response:

Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you found it that engaging. Thanks for the lovely comment!

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