Date: 03/17/2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. I think it was very sweet. I loved the pacing and how you managed to write, describe and include Spock's fragmented memory of the night on the planet and his collapse in the bathroom followed by his incoherent days in sickbay. You handled it EXCEPTIONALLY well. I was a little dismayed by Kirk's reaction when he found out he was the baby's father. I was a little confused as to why he didn't suspect so after he found out Spock got pregnant on a landing party since Kirk woke up naked in Spock's room. But I figured it was an arbitrary knee jerk reaction.
I was just a little disappointed that you didn't include the latter parts of the pregnancy or the birth. It would have been nice.
But I digress I loved this and normally I don't go for mpreg.
Thank you! In my mind Kirk didn't connect the dots because as far as he knew he and Spock had never had sex, and he didn't expect Spock to lie about it.
Date: 10/25/2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wowa281;New story!z88;I am realy happy because just a few days ago,I was grinning at the image of motion sickness Spock of your last story,and I found you updated new one!! I love the idea why Kirk hurt so badly when he thought Spock lied to him. May be Kirk knew, in the bottom of his heart, Spock never betray him, never test him,never judge him. But Kirk was too hurt to forgive him soon. Wonderful story !! Thank you very much for sharing us!
Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this fic, so it's good to know other people enjoyed reading it. :)
Date: 10/24/2015 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a great story and I enjoyed it from beginning to end, but I'm not ready for it to be over! You hinted about Spock telling his dad only with so much else going on it was never included. In a sequel you could go into depth about how Spock's family feels about his pregnancy, relationship with Jim, and about little Sam. *Hint, hint* Either way, thank you so much for sharing this! :)
Thank you! I don't like to promise sequels to my fics because there's a good chance I'll get distracted by a new idea and never get around to it, but I'll think about writing some more stuff in this verse. I'm glad you enjoyed it!