Date: 10/18/2015 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really, REALLY love this story and I love how you write Spock and Kirk. Your Kirk is so easy-going and wonderful and funny but also considerate and just wonderful. I love your Spock too – that he is sardonic but also shy and somehow seems vulnerable and then his and Kirk dynamic – the way you portrayed it is so fun to read. I like how they go on a road trip and their conversations and how at easy they seemed in each other companies. I like that Kirk did the first step with kissing Spock and I like it that Spock got nauseous after the Enterprise ride. People these days try to portray Spock so superhuman but he’s not and you showed that. And I like that at the end they came together and your writing is just wonderful.
Thank you for your review! It really made me smile. I'm glad you liked the fic and the way I wrote the characters, especially since I'm really more comfortable with their TOS incarnations.
Date: 10/18/2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just absolutely adore this story. It's fun to see Spock and Kirk on a road trip and doing things like playing games and going to a county fair. I also love that they got together during this trip. :)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!