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Reviewer: Milkyway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2015 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really, REALLY love this story and I love how you write Spock and Kirk. Your Kirk is so easy-going and wonderful and funny but also considerate and just wonderful. I love your Spock too – that he is sardonic but also shy and somehow seems vulnerable and then his and Kirk dynamic – the way you portrayed it is so fun to read. I like how they go on a road trip and their conversations and how at easy they seemed in each other companies. I like that Kirk did the first step with kissing Spock and I like it that Spock got nauseous after the Enterprise ride. People these days try to portray Spock so superhuman but he’s not and you showed that. And I like that at the end they came together and your writing is just wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! It really made me smile. I'm glad you liked the fic and the way I wrote the characters, especially since I'm really more comfortable with their TOS incarnations.

Reviewer: sunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was so sweet! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

I just absolutely adore this story.  It's fun to see Spock and Kirk on a road trip and doing things like playing games and going to a county fair.  I also love that they got together during this trip.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: nml Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

very nice, I especially liked the lightness, playfulness and comfort in each other's company:)



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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