Date: 12/10/2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not sure if you know this but yr other story (Smug . . .) is not loading when you click on the link. It has error msg about double headers from the server.
Have you tried again recently? Because I just tried it and could access it .. and other readers could access it also .. Maybe the Site was just glitching when you tried? If you still have trouble accessing "Smug.." I will be going to the Library later this week if weather permits I will try to fix it then if I can.
Date: 09/07/2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry to hear about your gallbalder problem, hope everything works out okay. Don't apologize because your baby and your health should have priority. We can wait on the chapters, but just want to let you know, I'm loving this story. Really appreciate how you are weaving in the original Star Trek and it's characters in with what's happened in the latest Star Trek movies. Looking forward to the rest of this story.
Date: 09/06/2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Mmh Jim has a bigger agenda but his hand is now pushed into dealing with the situation in his own ship. Bones now realises that there is far more to Jim's situation than he realises. Also hope stupid chapel gets taken down a peg or two when this pack of cards falls aparT for the enterprise.
Date: 08/29/2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it, finally Jim puts his foot down and up the rear end of insubordinate crew members. They need to learn a lesson and also Jim himself about respecting yourself, others and the guy who's in charge. It's hard to be the boss and also be friends with your underlings, because some will think they can do or say anything and it's okay. Looking forward to the other Spock raising a little hell Vulcan style. I can't see him not doing everything he can to stop Jim leaving the Enterprise and he certainly will have a little talk with his young counterpart. Great story, can't wait for more chapters.
Date: 08/25/2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Holy guacamole! Angst out the rear! I can usually handle Jim and Spock fighting, it happens, I understand that. But Jim and Bones??? And Scotty??? My heart is breaking! I hope this isn't going to end badly, because I understand not every story has a happy ending and sometimes the bad guy wins, but I just couldn't handle it right now. I'm in a fluff mood and I'm reading this because I want to see the crew come back together to be a family again (even if Jim and Spock only return to being friends). There was a line from another K/S story I read a long time ago where Uhura says "FIX THIS" and that is my command (actually, just a request) to you. Fix this. Bring our family back together. Jim can't be completely abandoned again. Please?? You're doing great and hey, congratulations on the little bundle of joy!