Date: 07/05/2015 7:14 PM Title: Kal-if-fee
I also enjoyed your take on this scene. Very well done.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was very interesting to write; one of those ideas that wouldn't let me go until I got it down. =) Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/02/2015 7:05 AM Title: Kal-if-fee
ahh, this is lovely. could have written it meself, it follows my own thoughts of this scene so well. very nicely done. and glorious to find an actual, complete story on this site, for once!!
I salute thee, for thee has wrought exceeding well!
I'm pleased that you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting! =)
Date: 06/26/2015 6:04 PM Title: Kal-if-fee
schenk uns doch noch die zeilen, der letzten szene als bonus!
die wir ohne eigene fantasie,
die letzte sätze von dir brauchen.
Danke, dass ich wieder etwas von dir lesen durfte!
I am actually very tempted to write more of this, but that will depend on whether or not I can get my other writing projects finished soon (I am writing two other Spirk stories at the moment). I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I thank you for the comment! It's been too long since I posted here!
Date: 06/26/2015 11:42 AM Title: Kal-if-fee
Excellent revisitation of the episode. You manage to give a depth to the action we see that goes far beyond what the scene shows. You successfully show the conflicting forces of the fever and the love and respect for the friend, you make us understand the struggle, how he loses it, the desperation in picturing a future without Jim. Very well done!
I'm glad I was able to effectively convey Spock's turmoil during and after the fight! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Date: 06/26/2015 2:08 AM Title: Kal-if-fee
When I read this on AO3, it didn't stop here. Did you choose to change the story, or did some of it just get lost in theh copying?
Oh no! I'll have to check and make sure I didn't screw it up somehow. Thanks! =)