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Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2016 1:57 AM Title: They Will Light My Way Tonight

That's great as a final chapter, getting everything right again. Somehow I feel that the post fal tor pan bit stands almost a bit on its own, as if it was a seperate story. And actually I think you could enhance it to a full length fic, one that follows the whole of the rehabilitation progress. What about that?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! I was a little curious as to what people would think of the final chapter. More curious about how my mirror verse history would be received. But now that you mention it it is kind of a departure from the rest of the fic. It's not a bad idea and I'll definitely consider it once I get my next project moving. Thanks for the feedback! Live long and prosper!

Reviewer: urmeli2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2016 2:44 PM Title: They Will Light My Way Tonight

Dir ist etwas ganz besonderes gelungen.

Vielen, vielen dank

Author's Response:

Vielen dank!
Es freut mich das es Ihnen gefallen hat

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 9:38 PM Title: And In Dreams You're Always Near To Me

Such a beautiful mournful passage



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much! I'm a big fan of your work. Nothing's As It Seems is one of my personal favorites.

Reviewer: minakaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2015 2:58 AM Title: And In Dreams You're Always Near To Me

My heart hurts... but I throughly enjoyed that last paragraph. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! It'll get better, I promise! ;-)

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2015 7:54 AM Title: Twilight Sings A Song

Sorry meant redacted scene. I like your decision to rehabilitate Mirror Kirk and the take on the fal-tor-pan. One to keep reviewing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2015 7:13 AM Title: Twilight Sings A Song

Reads like a reacted scene. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Hope you enjoyed it. The next chapter is going to have a huge deus ex machina which I hope won't alienate too many people. Anyway, hope you enjoy the following chapters! ;-) live long and prosper!

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2015 3:24 AM Title: Twilight Sings A Song

This promises to be a very powerful story. I am not sure that, in the third from the last paragraph, "grumbled" is quite the right word. Since Kirk is about to weep uncontrollably, perhaps a word like "sob" or "moan" would be more apt than a word that suggests "complaining."  Or something like "whispered," adding that his voice stuck in his throat, or other words to suggest the pain he is feeling and how difficult it is to say anything at all in his overshelming grief.

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!!! I took your advice into consideration and I may fix that. The way it had played in my head I figured he hadn't quite lost control when he declared he should have died with Spock. Like he was speaking like a beaten dog but he hasn't lost it quite yet.

There's going to be a HUGE deus ex machina in the next chapter so I hope this story doesn't disappoint. I'm hoping my next fic will be mostly emotional.

hope all is well. Live long and prosper!!! ;-)

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