Reviews For Vulnerable
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Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really like this. So few words but so much meaning. I also like the fact you come full circle. The title is called Vulnerable and you end with that word as well. I love that. Perfect. 

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is quite evocative in its economy of words. It conveys a picture of Kirk as perhaps inexperienced with men or perhaps with penetration, yet wanting very much to offer himself to Spock. Good poem.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your input. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it c:

Reviewer: Fox Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Lovely :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! ^-^

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