Date: 04/05/2015 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderful story with a lot of pathos and love packed into a few paragraphs. Spock was delaying because he was waiting for Jim to come after him, to see if Jim loved him enough. I'm happy to see Jim passed the test.
I hope you consider doing a follow up to this story. I would love to see what comes next.
And thank goodness McCoy was there to provide some insight too. Jim needs both of them.
Date: 04/05/2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Schön, nur zu kurz!
Freue mich mehr von dir zulesen
I used Google translate which is hopefully accurate... Thank you! Yeah, it is shorter than what I usually do, but it said everything I wanted it to say. Not sure if I'llmadd to this story but I certainly will write more k/s in the future. Thanks again!
Date: 04/04/2015 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
(I post reviews on both to give hits for the both sites and I like the ?focus of K/S - so same content essentially).
First, very excited to see an entry from you! I keep thinking of the other 2 works, and hoping, but don't want to nag or anything :) But always great to read your work!
Second, I, too, was surprised by how much LM's passing upset me. I knew I would be, but I was really upset - for weeks it was my obsession, all I had to do was put "L" in my search box. I think if he'd just made it to the 50th anniversary and ST3, for me, as fan of decades, would been ?closure - I don't know, but I had fantasies of what they'd do next year, and maybe the Oscars since I it was around that time and I was thinking they have to do something for ST. Everyone must die, but ... even I'll admit it was a little disproportionate
Third, LOVED the story - the idea, the writing, the emotion, all great. One thing I don't like about TMP is the idea that they lost touch w/each other, how could they?! Real life is one thing, but they're epic! (and were again) So I appreciate this fix. Like I appreciate those who fix and/or negate Generations :) So thanks for the great read!
Thanks for posting reviews on both sites. You are awesome. :)
Date: 04/03/2015 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story. I had expected more resistance from Spock, but it's all good. As far as Leonard Nimoy's death is concerned, I think many of us are working out our feelings through stories. Mine will be posted at some point as well. I hope this made you feel better.
Yeah, I did cut it short. I wanted to get it posted yesterday because I was feeling hurt about how other Nimoy fans treated me, and posting made me feel better. Thank you so much! And thanks for the support. I love reading the tributes. It makes me feel great knowing how many other people care about him. I want his memory to stay alive and cared about for a long, long time.