Date: 01/09/2017 1:01 PM Title: Loving a Void
Personally I prefer prose to verse, but here I feel the form matches Jim's mood nicely, the returning words like a knife's stabs into an already bleeding heart.
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Date: 11/30/2016 11:20 AM Title: Loving a Void
You could read this as being any of the pivotal points in the Jim/Spock life story it would be equally poignant. I am beginning to understand free verse a little more thanks to your writing.
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Date: 11/30/2016 9:25 AM Title: Loving a Void
Such a very emotional piece. You can really feel, experience what Jim is going through. Very nicely done. Jim needs a big hug pronto. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 10/22/2016 8:35 PM Title: Life Support
Really, truely beautiful. I love it so much, the quiet flowing of your prose. And the second person POV is prefect for this moment in their relationship. It somehow reflects the intensity of Spock's feelings for his mate, but also the abyss that has formed between them. Thanks so much for this jewel.
Thank you so much for your kind words!! I'm really glad you liked it. :D
Date: 10/08/2016 3:32 AM Title: Life Support
Second person, not first person. Really hard to come by and even harder to do well. Very well done!!!!
AHH you're right!!! Thanks for pointing that out! And many many thanks for reading!! I'm so glad you liked it. <333
Date: 08/24/2016 7:39 PM Title: Tapestry
I like it much. It's very intimate. And that is a great sentence: "They’re the lasting remnants of rejection and isolation, of hushed whispers and echoing criticism, of implied insufficiency, of assumed inadequacy, of Vulcan, of Earth, of being too much of both and yet never enough of each."
It says all about Spock. ;-) Great.
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Date: 08/22/2016 7:39 PM Title: Tapestry
Brilliance - These are my favourite sections/paragraphs/lines: those that mention glittering stellar fabric, and the earlier mention of the 'frayed edge of bleeding emotion'... Yet, all of it is SO Very, Very WELL done!!!
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Date: 08/20/2016 5:43 AM Title: Meant to Be
How powerful and romantic at the same time! I get the feeling of the two of them circling around each other not in a hotel room but in the starlit void of space. Really, truely beautiful!
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Date: 08/13/2016 12:33 AM Title: Meant to Be
That, in all, total, honesty, has to be a contender for; very likely the BEST story I have read, in the world of Slash pairings, and Love Storiies... It is so well written that those mere words do not convey enough of it's artistry and completeness. It comes from a tremendously gifted person. It puts my own offerings in the shade, because, unlike my own work, NOTHING about THIS is mediocre. I'm not searching for assurance. I'm not kissing your boots. I am simply speaking fact. This piece of work proves that fan fiction is made up of real talent, and actually, truly has worth, in the best sense of the word, and the sentiment or notion.
OH MY GOSHHH Thank you so, so, SO much for reading and commenting!! I'm absolutely thrilled you liked it so much! :D (I'm sorry for the delay in replying; I didn't get a comment notif email for some reason.)
Date: 03/08/2016 10:00 PM Title: Matters of the Human Heart
It's more fiction and less science ... so who cares? It is an interesting idea and you made a lovely little fic out of it. I feel free to think that the process was reversed in the end, though.
Thank you so much for reading!! I'm really glad you liked it. <3333 Yes, I would hope too that the process was reversed because Spock is perfect as he is. =)