Date: 12/25/2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Firstly, what a wonderfully sweet story. While not exactly innocent, it was rather touching and heartwarming. I'll admit, however, I am rather upset that Amanda (Prime) is more into Spock Prime than Nu!Spock. It only makes sense, Prime being her actual son from her universe, but it still felt like Spock was lacking in the mother area. It seems all 4 of the children are still young enough to not understand time-jumps and continuums and immediatly accept her as their grandmother. And, Sarek's reaction when Spock called. "The both of you are not pregnant again, are you?" (paraphrasing the entire reaction) Classic, and something relatable, being the eldest of 5 children.
Secondly, I wished to ask permission of a term and anatomic part that I believe was created by you. In one of my challenges (as I am not a very good, or even a mediocore writer) I asked for an mpreg, and for the 'believable' aspect of it, a Vulcan auxilary uterious that I stated I could not remember the creator of. It only hit me, while reading this implied mpreg (which I know was Jim as the 'mommy' but, my mind works in crazy ways) that YOU had used it in your seahorse series. I am not writing anything, and I highly doubt any author will ever take up any of my challenges, but I am only asking permission to use the term/body part. It was your creation, after all.
Thank you very much.
No problem. Feel free to use the auxilary uterus as needed, lol. Just credit me if you would be so kind, since I think I DID invent it.
As for Amanda and Spock Prime, I couldn't figue out a way to bring Young Spock's mother back, and he does still have Sarek, Jim, and the kids. I thought Spock Prime needed someone worse than young Spock did.
Date: 12/23/2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic! So glad there's now another story in this series - and what a story! I love that you brought Amanda back - brilliant!