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Reviewer: Spockania20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was a lovely little short. I'm pretty confused and a little irritated that someone would give it two stars because it's definitely a an awesome piece. You get 10 in my book ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you! Some people just like to nitpick, I guess, but I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Thomas Dont Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

You don't need all this description of action. "he says". "he says". "Spock tells him quietly". 

Don't tell me things; "He feels, more than sees". Show me.

Also, you haven't got their voices distinct enough from each other.

Keep at it. Good potential.

Author's Response:

Your opinion is noted.

Reviewer: riekel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for old married Spirk! They both are so in character :) And it's so heartwarming to know that the peace they have accomplished did last.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, it's good to know they made a difference.

Reviewer: kimko krnhl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you very much lovely story.  I really believed  that after everything had doned, Kirk would spend his night watching Klingon Hamlet,and Spock would join him.Although your story are always so sweet, I miss Bones. I love your Bones especially at "Invisible Threads", I really want to enjoy his banter with Kirk ! ( of course with Spock too)

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on a fic with Bones in it at the moment, and hope to post it soon.

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