Date: 12/23/2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was a lovely little short. I'm pretty confused and a little irritated that someone would give it two stars because it's definitely a an awesome piece. You get 10 in my book ;)
Thank you! Some people just like to nitpick, I guess, but I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 12/17/2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
You don't need all this description of action. "he says". "he says". "Spock tells him quietly".
Don't tell me things; "He feels, more than sees". Show me.
Also, you haven't got their voices distinct enough from each other.
Keep at it. Good potential.
Your opinion is noted.
Date: 12/14/2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you very much lovely story. I really believed that after everything had doned, Kirk would spend his night watching Klingon Hamlet,and Spock would join him.Although your story are always so sweet, I miss Bones. I love your Bones especially at "Invisible Threads", I really want to enjoy his banter with Kirk ! ( of course with Spock too)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on a fic with Bones in it at the moment, and hope to post it soon.