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Reviewer: tiptoetulips Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 2: Background to add to this story...

oooo nice addition! thanks for adding!



Author's Response:

I'm glad some of you seem to think it's worthy/worth commenting on - Many Thanks!!

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very fine. I like it.

Author's Response:

THANK YOU, as ever xxxxxX

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 2: Background to add to this story...

Thank you so much for sharing the background to this story and your "headcanon." I enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Hiya - THANK YOU! I know it was a bit of a cheat; I had the ideas, but not exactly the formulation of a story in my head, worthy of 'telling' the chapter...

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

What would Kirk's son be called? Well ... TOS Kirk: George Samuel (after his father and brother whom he still mourns and would want to honor). Nu!Kirk: Christopher ('nuff said  ....)

But I assume Carol picked the name, since they weren't together and Kirk probably was nowhere in sight at the time of the birth.



Author's Response:

Maybe, but George is already George, and yes, Carol would pick this name - but, say, his and Spock's son, the name George would be in there somewhere...

Reviewer: tiptoetulips Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

awwwwww this was sweet. I needed this after reading some very dark things today. thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Kind of you to say - Thanks for adding to my feedback total! So glad. Thanks!

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

A very interesting twist on why Spock left for Gol as well as Kirk's relationship with David, er, Mitch. The pon farr scenario was an interesting twist, as well.



Author's Response:

Couldn't bring myself to use David, my ex's name. I am much happier in life with my someone new, but considering D Marcus's original fate, well, I like to use a new name -make him someone somewhat new - though I still picture Merrit Butrick. Never been a huge fan of the name David anyway - what do you think Jim's son might be called? Mitch, Max, Jason, Chris - Not sure...

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was very lovely to read.  :)



Author's Response:

Bless - Thank YOU xx I do appreciate my kind reviews/reviwersgenuinely xx

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