Date: 10/11/2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was so clever! It also reminded me of that competition that CP & ZQ - I think ZQ did something similar in an Australian interview where he used ?50 words in one sitting - adorably awkward to watch (for me). No awkwardness here - I liked this fic! it was on point w/the characters and verbal word play ... kudos to you for writing it!
Date: 10/11/2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh never thought of Spock as having swallowed a SAT or even an SAT text. But this is a really good idea for writing practice. Could just about hear Quinto even see the raised eyebrows. Drunk Kirk is so fratboy.
Date: 10/11/2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hilarious! I laughed out loud at the way you used these words. I am not sure about a few of them ("anachronistic," "enervating" and "demagogue"), but most uses were brilliantly appropriate.





Date: 10/11/2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed reading this so much!