Date: 10/08/2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
awwwww...I really enjoyed reading this. I'm new to this site, but I'm literally just drinking all fo this in. A whole site dedicated to K/S??? I've died and gone to heaven. Again, very beautifully written! Thanks for sharing!!
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 10/06/2014 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it, especially how he's never had sex with a man but knows they gotta do the buttsechs the first time. Somehow you managed to write a cute story anyway.
Thank you! It was definitely fun to write.
Date: 10/05/2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Congratulations! It was as terrible as you'd hoped it would be. :-)
I've read an awful lot of stories -- ones that were meant seriously -- that were not much different than this. (I read one the other day that used the phrase "straining manhood," and I had to sit on my hands so as not to leave a negative comment. :-D) I'm glad your tongue was firmly in your cheek.
Thank you! And yeah, there are some silly euphemisms out there - I'm pretty sure I've seen 'jade pillar' used seriously before. :)
Date: 10/04/2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hilariously, embarassingly horrible! :D I think that any K/S writer who reads this will have a hard time writing his next fic! The most funny one of the clichés for me was the contraction one - and the one which really gets on my nerves when reading fics is that two men who never had another male lover just jump into bed together, open the nightstand-drawer, take out the lube and have absolutely gorgeous, satisfying sex because they perfectly know all the right things to do. AND they climax together, perfect timing!
You surely met the challenge!! Badfic, yeah, intentional, of course, because we all know you as a wonderful writer!
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, that cliche bugs me too, especially when it implies that penetrative sex is the only kind that 'counts'.