Date: 10/06/2015 1:47 AM Title: Epilogue
This was a sweet chapter. Finally, a Jim who needs a Spock. It would also seem that this Spock is a little wiser since his visit to the last universe.
Thank you, I'm glad you think so. Yes, I think Spock learned a lot from his visit to the other universe. Hopefully he and the other Kirk will help to heal each other.
Date: 10/06/2015 1:39 AM Title: Part 2
It was good to see Spock getting pangs of jealousy at his counterparts interactions with Jim. It kept me hoping his memory would come back spontaneously. As for alternate Spock we really see here how badly he's come undone as a result of the loss of his Jim. In spite of him trying to erase Jim's memory of Spock we realize he's in a lot of pain and willing to do anything to ablate it. It probably governed his behavior in the last chapter when he sees Jim and doesn't tell him who he really is. Likewise I felt for him, he lost his husband and he's not getting him back. It was also enlightening and inspiring to see Jim forgive him easily and tell him not to give up, there probably is a Jim in another universe who needs him. Hope he finds what he's looking for.
Thank you for your thoughts, it's good to know the scenes with the alternate Spock came off as they were supposed to - that he's wrong but still sympathetic.
Date: 10/02/2015 10:48 PM Title: Part 1
this was good. You really feel for both of them. Both wanting desperately for the affection of the person he lost but unable to attain it, regardless of how close it may be.
Thank you, I'm glad you think so.
Date: 09/25/2014 2:46 AM Title: Epilogue
This story is amazing and heartbreaking.I am glad that Jim and his spock had finally found their way to build a new relationship after Genesis, but I cried for Au spock.Your description are vivid and portrayal and feeling of the characters are very real. I cried his pain and his love for Jim which drove him insane. I am not sure if Au Jim's decision to accept AU Spock was right or not.But I am sure that there was no other way to heal their broken souls. Thank you very much wonderful story.
Thank you! Yeah, Alternate Spock was in a lot of pain, poor guy. Kirk got his love back, but not everyone can be that lucky. Hopefully the alternate Kirk and Spock can heal each other, even if it's not quite the same as having their own partners back.
Date: 09/23/2014 7:38 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for giving this Spock a Kirk... lovely little story.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 09/23/2014 7:31 PM Title: Epilogue
There are days when the Archive rewards my fidelty with a story like this one, sweetly, painfully but oh so deeply beautiful. I'm so glad they all found healing in the end, even if the wounds remain as scars.
Thank you! I've wanted to write a fic like this for a while, so I'm glad you liked it.