Date: 09/04/2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was so happy to see you right for the boys. It didn't bother me that it was a friendship story. It was a very humorous piece. Don't you love it when Spock gets drunk...he's hilarious.
Can you see Spock throwing his clothes in the river...Jim just couldn't believe his eyes when he did it..
Oh, and towards the end when we find out that Spock had actually called his father. TEnjoyed this immensely.
Date: 09/04/2014 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was SO FUNNY - and very TOS tone . I wouldn't change a thing! Spock was a little OOC, for me, even drunk, but it was well written and funny and not too out there that I kept reading (usully if too OOC even if a way that I like, I just get thrown out of the story - but this was just right)
thanks for sharing :)