Date: 07/20/2014 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, lovely! You capture them so well, the looks, the hesitancy and incertainties, the sudden opening up. I was almost sorry your fic ended there. I would have liked to read about the trip back ... ;)
Date: 07/18/2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the opening of this little story. How you compare two different elements in a beaker and when mingled together what reaction comes from it. Either they just sit there and do nothing or explode and make a huge mess.
Strange how Uhura is seeking warmth elsewhere from her friends while Jim finds heat in Spock's presence.
Communication is not an easy thing. It's hard for people to say how they feel. They worry so much about each other. Jim wants Spock to say something, anything...finally after a long silence between them Spock does open up.
What a relief for Jim. He's finally understanding his friend. The tension between them has let up. They can finally breathe.
They'll be alright. Thanks for sharing this.
Oooh, thank you so much for this well thought out review! So kind of you :) :) :)