Date: 06/05/2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
An good start. I like it and wait for more. ;-)
Thanks for your review. I hadn't intended to expand this -- it was sort of a one off thing in the middle of the night. I just neglected to check the "complete" box. Whoops!
Date: 06/05/2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful, endearing! I love it so much when it is their minds and katras being attracted to one another even before there is any physical attraction.
Thanks for the review! I do think that even if they initially hated each other, if they are really t'hy'la, they would be drawn together in some way.