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Reviewer: AshayaTReldai Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm not good enough with my Deutsch to be able to get the nuances, but I did want to say how thrilled I am that you're writing, Sera!



Author's Response: Thanks very much Ashaya. I'm very happy you give me a review. ;-) Sometimes I have tiny ideas... but it never is enough for a great story... But so little tales are also nice.... ;-) Llap Sera.

Reviewer: KeBo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Dsa war nun wirklich fast zu süß zum aushalten. Aber eine sehr nette Geschichte. Aber ein bisschen schmunzeln musste ich zwischendurch auch. Was wären Spock und Jim nur ohne Bones?

Übrigens: Ich mag es, dass du den englischen Namen Bones und nicht den deutschen Pille genommen hast.



Author's Response: Hey KeBo, lieben Dank für dein Review. ;-) Geb dir völlig recht - ist sssseeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhrrr fluffig ausgefallen. Weiß nicht mehr so recht was mich da geritten hat. Aber es musste sein. ;-) Ich mag "Bones" auch viel lieber als "Pille" Fand Pille schon immer doof und Bones passt viel besser zu der Figur... ;-) LG Sera

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Super, dass Du Dich entschieden hast, zu schreiben!

Sorry if I review in English, I'm definitely not accustomed to do so in German, even reading K/S in German feels soooo strange!

Your story is charming, I can totally see how they would forget about their crew completely taken up in their work and their new bond. Nevertheless, to see them display their affection in public feels out of character to me. I mean, I just can't envision them doing it - but that is only my point of view. I like Bones' bringing the whole thing to Jim's attention, ever the one to have the overall view of the crew's needs.

Keep going, you're doing fine!



Author's Response: Hey angelocustode, thanks for your review. ;-) I totaly agree with you that I make it a little to much in the end... And I can't really imagine that they dance closely together... But I was in a fluff modus and couldn't stop to do it. ;-) ;-) Sera

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Süß. Liebe die Szene tun Papierkram zusammen!



Author's Response: Die Szene schwirrte mir eine Weile im Kopf herum. Musste einfach was drumherum schreiben. ;-) Danke fürs Review. ;-)

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