Date: 06/08/2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely hot and intense. I love the ending, the utter rightness of their belonging to each other expressed in simple, single words. That's effective writing!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you very much for reading my story and for leaving this lovely comment!
Date: 06/02/2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very good, satisfying read w/a great ending. You also go the TOS characterizations spot on, I can usually switch the cast for most stories, esp when the background is not essential to the story, but not here. kudos!
This is a wonderful compliment! Thank you! I am nuts about TOS, so getting the characterizations right is very important to me. Thank you for reading!
Date: 06/01/2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just reread this steamy-ness, and then realized that my last review was completely inaccurate in that apparently I cannot remember which parts went with which numbers! *face palm* Must have been overwhelmed by all the yummy events going on! So, I meant to originally say: Favorite sections are 3. Wall (jealous Kirk! yes!), 5. The Table (oh sweet deity-of-your-choice, yes!), and 6. Spock's Turn (yum, and aww). Not that my mistype previously means I also didn't enjoy those other parts a little too much, but...this is what happens when you aren't totally focused when you review. Okay, sorry to spam-review you! ~ RK
You can spam-review me all you like! :D And I love that those are your favorites because they're mine too!
Date: 06/01/2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, what a lovely and hot afternoon treat to stumble upon. Definitely loved the jealous Kirk section...Parts 2, 5, and 4 are my favorites. The whole thing is delicious, but those were my favorite scenarios. ~ RK
I absolutely love jealous Kirk! That scene was my favorite to write! That and the scene on the table! I'm really glad you liked it and thought it was hot!