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Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Lovely hot and intense. I love the ending, the utter rightness of their belonging to each other expressed in simple, single words. That's effective writing!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you very much for reading my story and for leaving this lovely comment!

Reviewer: Bedwench Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was fantastic, funny, intense, very very well written and crafted. I really enjoyed it and the sex....red hot.



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much for this comment! I'm happy you enjoyed it! 

Reviewer: nml Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very good, satisfying read w/a great ending. You also go the TOS characterizations spot on, I can usually switch the cast for most stories, esp when the background is not essential to the story, but not here. kudos!



Author's Response:

This is a wonderful compliment! Thank you! I am nuts about TOS, so getting the characterizations right is very important to me. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just reread this steamy-ness, and then realized that my last review was completely inaccurate in that apparently I cannot remember which parts went with which numbers!  *face palm* Must have been overwhelmed by all the yummy events going on!  So, I meant to originally say: Favorite sections are 3. Wall (jealous Kirk! yes!), 5. The Table (oh sweet deity-of-your-choice, yes!), and 6. Spock's Turn (yum, and aww).  Not that my mistype previously means I also didn't enjoy those other parts a little too much, but...this is what happens when you aren't totally focused when you review.  Okay, sorry to spam-review you! ~ RK



Author's Response:

You can spam-review me all you like! :D And I love that those are your favorites because they're mine too! 

Reviewer: Raven Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well, what a lovely and hot afternoon treat to stumble upon.  Definitely loved the jealous Kirk section...Parts 2, 5, and 4 are my favorites.  The whole thing is delicious, but those were my favorite scenarios. ~ RK



Author's Response:

I absolutely love jealous Kirk! That scene was my favorite to write! That and the scene on the table! I'm really glad you liked it and thought it was hot!

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2014 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

All the scenes were most enjoyable, well-written and hot!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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