Date: 05/17/2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I love seeing Kirk's and Spock's loving relationship through McCoy's eyes. It bothered me a little that the Kalazan ambassador was able to use her psychic power to impose something that intrusive on Spock and McCoy, but it was necessary to get the two of them into the situation you created (I doubt they would ever had agreed to it voluntarily!). But I'm not complaining, because this was such a good character study.
Thank you! Yeah, I didn't intend the ambassador's actions to be totally OK, even if she thought she was doing the right thing. But it all worked out all right in the end.
Date: 05/17/2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awww. This was sweet. I love old married Spirk anyway but this was extra special as it had the third leg of the trio involved. It would take seeing how Spock loves Jim for Bones to ease up, wouldn't it? This was great. Thanks so much for posting it!
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, Spock and McCoy don't see eye to eye on much, but Kirk is one of the few things they agree on.
Date: 05/17/2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Charming little story, well written, well paced. It's nice to see the two of them softening towards one another.
I sometimes wonder: was it more the meld with V'Ger that changed Spock or was it Gol?
Thank you! I suppose Gol could be part of it, but to me the meld with V'Ger (and the scene afterwards in sickbay) is when Spock really accepts himself and his emotions. That's just my opinion, though. :)
Date: 05/16/2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love stories that illustrate the Kirk/McCoy friendship and... particularly ones where McCoy gets some level of understanding about the bond between Spock and Jim! This ticked all the boxes, for me, it was a pleasure to read! :-)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Of course Kirk and Spock are in love, but their friendship with McCoy is important too.