Date: 11/15/2019 5:57 PM Title: 1/1
Not sure if I responded to this story before, but Kirk is a real self pitying jerk in it throughout the entire first part, I wanna slap the crap out of him! Then after he does his own Thing, he returns and decides to be nice to,Spock....or at least sexually nice to him. Hmmmmmm.......?
Date: 01/04/2016 4:24 AM Title: 1/1
Portions of this I liked very much. Other parts, not so much. Above all, I felt that there were errors in the basic characterisation of the representation of Kirk, and Spock also. It felt more like an AU Alternate Universe than either TOS or Abrams. Most especially in the early and mid-more than in personal scenes at the end that felt less out of character and seemed to me more valid and certain of touch. I would advise watching more Star Trek.
Date: 07/29/2014 9:02 PM Title: 1/1
I'm sorry, but this doesn't sound like Jim Kirk to me; Kirk just isn't this petty.
I'm sorry you didn't like it, although it happens hen reading fic. I don't know Reboot Kirk very well: I've only seen the first reboot film, and I wrote this series years before it was released. My focus has always been on the original version, and my perception may be different from yours if you first approached K/S through the Reboot films.
I wrote this series to focus on Spock's struggle with his identity/ies, and I've never perceived neither Kik nor Spock as without any moment of pettiness, exasperation, misundestanding, flaws, frustration, etc. Sometmes we don't understand what we want or need, sometimes we are mistaken, sometimes we're a litle bit lost; we don't always know what and who we are and sometimes we take out our own frustation with life, work... out on people who don't deserve it and have nothing to do with it. I was interested in these topics and tried to deal with them as I could about 10 years ago ;-)
This is certainly no the best fic out there (even not my best) and I'm sure you'll find something you'll enjoy more! :-)