Date: 04/08/2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well written, sparse and in a perfect Kirk-voice. The void that is tearing at Kirks soul, the ache of going on, the lack of light to the days...you convey this deep sadness so well - for us it is mitigated by the knowledge, that Spock WILL live again.
Thank you! It's interesting to write things like this, because of course while we know Spock will come back, Kirk doesn't know that, and so his grief is very real.