Date: 03/11/2014 12:50 AM Title: What Remains
I love how Jim is dealing with this. It's the way I've always imagined and perceived him, that this guy should not and would not give up, that he would support everyone around him even if there is little or no hope. I love the way he is dependent on Spock and admits his vulnerability in this. And I begin to suspect that it wasn't Spock who killed all those people with a surge of energy, but maybe this is a false assumption :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Jim and Spock need each other, almost like two halves of a whole; which can result in great things, or in dangers to both of them. It's really fun to delve into the characters while writing. And more info about the surge of energy in the just-posted chapter! -C
Date: 03/10/2014 11:36 PM Title: What Remains
Yikes, things are so tense between Jim and Spock and not that I can blame them. I hope they'll find their way back to each other (mental joining that is). great chapter!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Stay tuned! -C
Date: 03/10/2014 11:30 PM Title: Join The Party
I could make a joke about Jim's soul being too attractive, but it feels like gallows humor. That's just too damn cruel! Please don't let it be permanent ... please? On to the next and hopefully we'll find some chicken soup to cure a Vulcan's katra. :)
Yeah, their strength can also be their weakness... Stay tuned! -C
Date: 03/10/2014 9:57 PM Title: To Have, And Then To Lose
Too bad Admiral Ass**** wasn't in the room! A new adage for the universe ... never piss off a Vulcan by messing with his bonded. Something that Rader probably wouldn't have heeded even if he'd know about it. Great chapter, now onto the next!
Date: 03/10/2014 3:45 AM Title: And There I Held You
*sigh* I read chapter 5 before chapter 4. But still, poor Spock. He's really having a rough time of it and I can't wait to see how this is all dealt with. Great chapter!
Oh, nuts. I posted the two chapters fairly closely because I thought they needed continuity (and it's exciting when everyone seems to be enjoying reading them). Sorry! More to come later today! Thanks for the lovely reviews!! -C
Date: 03/10/2014 3:41 AM Title: Join The Party
Oh, poor Spock! and poor Jim as well since anything dealing with Spock involves him too.
Yeah, Spock's dealing with bad stuff, and Jim's not doing so well either. New chapter to be posted later today! -C
Date: 03/08/2014 3:26 AM Title: A Beach To Walk On
Your writing style is wonderful as always and the premise is very intriguing. I'm very glad that you began to post the sequel and can't wait for more. I wish the two parts of this story were actually movies or TV series episodes :)
You know, I kind of envision the scenes as a movie when I write. Thanks for reading and reviewing! More on the way! -C
Date: 03/08/2014 3:25 AM Title: A Beach To Walk On
It's good to see you back for this sequel! There is no space for peaceful shoreleave for our friends with deviant Admirals running free.
No vacation for our boys yet, unfortunately. Thanks for reading! -C
Date: 03/08/2014 2:50 AM Title: A Beach To Walk On
Wow, this can't be good! I wonder if the alien thingy will even work on Spock and if not, it might force the evil Admiral to do away with the Vulcan. Jim's an incredibly strong and resilient character, hopefully he will be able to overcome whatever is thrown at him. Enjoying the sequel as much as I did the first. Thank you so much for sharing it!
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it; more on the way! -C