Date: 03/03/2014 10:40 AM Title: Killed me with love for that Boy
This was beautiful. I loved the way Spock pined after Jim and that he assumed Jim would never--could never return his affection, even though he was just as smitten as Spock. I loved how they got together at the end, and my favorite scene had to be when Jim overheard the 'confession' Imagining that in my head was delightful. Thanks for writing it!
Date: 03/03/2014 2:43 AM Title: Killed me with love for that Boy
I much like the tension of Spock's longing, his inability to see the openings in his captain's behaviour and the way everything dissolves in the moment he finds himself unable to stop confessing all his troubled feelings to Jim.