Date: 03/06/2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I believe these are my favorite phrases in this piece:
[the door sailed all the way open, bounced off the wall, and swung back, closing] Perfect slapstick!
[the space between their lips almost daring to become nonexistent.] Perfect poetry!
I like the art. Kirk looks so young! Fun, isn't it, asking for commisions? (I did it, too). Really brings out the story. I wish there was a way to filter for storeis with original art.
^_^ Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!! YES, coupling art with writing makes reading stories an even better experience! :D
Date: 02/20/2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely story. I love the moment of truth Spock feels. When they return to their own timeline, I am sure they'll figure out where to go from here.
I'm very glad you enjoyed it! ^_^ Yes, they'll eventually figure it out once it dawns on one of these smart men that all those little subtleties are more than what they appear on the surface. Relationships between humans are complicated enough, but when you're dealing with a guy who has this strong urge to bury all of his feelings and was never exposed to what love actually is, that makes the whole development a delightful process to explore. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! <3
Date: 02/19/2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
You are an excellent writer and I hope to see more of your work! Thanks for this story!
Wow, I'm so so so glad you enjoyed this and incredibly happy that you like my writing! I'll do my best to keep delivering. ^_^ Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review! <3
Date: 02/19/2014 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was having a bad day, I decided to see if there was anything good on tumblr before going back to school, and it only took 5 minutes to turn a bad day into a good one.
I DON'T KNOW HOW TO THANK YOU FOR THIS. I made a funny noise when I saw it and now let me tell you about my feels:
First of all, do you read minds? Because this follows my personal headcanon like very few fanfics ever did before! I always thought they declared their love at the end of TMP and that they stumbled through the 5 year mission hopelessly in love with each other.
Second, MIGHTY GODS IN SHA KA REE YOUR WRITING IS FLAWLESS. I think I'll never get over how detailed the descriptions are. I can actually SEE the scenes (and believe me seeing Jim in that plaid shirt, in Spock's arms... mmmm)
And t'hyla... Spock holding Jim's shirt... The tenderness of Spock's every move when he undresses Jim... the feeling of belonging, and love, and comfort... because he only feels at home when he's with Jim *wipes a tear*
I CAN NEVER THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR THIS. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
*Falls over* I don't even know what to say! I'm very happy you like it! It's much shorter than the usual length I write and really has no plot so I was honestly worried about posting it. But now I'm glad I did since it made you smile. ^O^ My favorite scene to write was when Jim's forehead fell against Spock's because it gave me feels of epic proportions. HEHE
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! <3
Date: 02/19/2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, don't we all want James Kirk in a plaid shirt...I wonder if Jim will remember Spock removing that shirt..Such missed opportunities... Here's a little something I made a few years ago. Thanks for sharing your story.
Jim missed out on his one chance, because Spock would never ever feel that way about him. All the while, Spock thinks the same. Hehe... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! <3