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Reviewer: AshayaTReldai Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2014 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

Hi, is this the end of the story? If it's not finished, could you change the category to work in progress - as per the instructions on the front page of this site? Makes it easier for your readers that way...

Looking fwd to where you take this.

Author's Response:

Hi! I'm not sure what you're talking about. My screen is showing that it's already marked as a work in progress. I capped it since I don't seem to be able to add an image in a response here. 

Anyway, there's one chapter left. :)


Reviewer: WendyPlains Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Reviewer: WendyPlains Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This] Date: 01/28/2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1


Great story and you are a very good writer.

I am, though, very wary of WIP's, most start out all right and then the updates get furthet and further spart until most of them pester out with never a conclusion.  It's difficult to invest time and interest in reading a story only to never have it satisfactorily concluded.  Hope this one does not go down that road.  :)



Reviewer: AshayaTReldai Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2014 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

This story is intense! Please update soon.

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