Date: 01/20/2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
This ending is very satisfying! I thought that you kept both of them very much in character too, which is one of the things I need to truly enjoy a story.
Thank you! ICness is important to me too, so I'm glad you thought they were in character.
Date: 01/13/2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like how they didn't just jump straight into the sack (though if I'm being honest I rather like it when they do, as well) because it lends a reality to the story.
Thanks, I'm glad you think so. I feel like after everything that happened with Rayna Kirk would be a bit hesitant about rushing into things.
Date: 01/12/2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this ending a lot better than the one in which Spock says "Forget." Of course, we don't know what really happened, since the episode ended right then. Maybe your ending IS the "real" ending!
Maybe! I kind of like the ending in the episode, but it does make me wonder if Kirk ever found out what Spock did - judging by his reaction to Sybok I doubt he'd be happy about it.