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Reviewer: WriterPam4 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2017 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

"The Climax built and built and built until they raggedly found themselves screaming and streaming for one another."

I am certain your intention was not for me to laugh. But please, it is too much.



Author's Response:

Yeah, well, I never once claimed to be a great writer. Still don't get why you feel the need to comment on my every mistake. Manners are a virtue.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: How Some Things Are Arranged

Oh, this was such a beautiful chapter!



Author's Response:

That is SOOOO Kind of you!!! Bless you x

Reviewer: Sera Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sarek was a little emotional.
But he was also when Vulcan was destroid. And I belive he really have understand what he have lost and hurt him in a deep level. And Spock too. And he seems to be a little bit more open for emotions as before. So - I found your letter from Sarek good and right. :-)

Author's Response:

Many Thanks xxx

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 2: How Some Things Are Arranged

you did it again...

tears in my eyes and a smile on my lips... very beautiful.

Sareks letter is great and a big absolution for Spock and - for Jim. Very good.

Author's Response:

I'm not sure that the letter isn't a bit much in places, but thanks xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awww, what a beautiful and lovely story!  I love this to bits.



Author's Response:

THANK YOU xx I'm so relieved and gladened (gladenned/gladdenned??!) that it's been well received!! THANK YOU for your Kindness xx

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice. I love it.

Only one thing: I often read that Vulcand dont wear rings because..
But thats not true. Sarek wore a big ring in Star Trek II and later in the next generation.... :-)

Author's Response:

I've not read that... Interesting though - and, maybe, the fact that Sarek did so, fits in with what/why I've said in this story... It's a bit of info I'll file away anyhow xx THANKS for the review xxxx

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