Date: 12/30/2013 3:07 AM Title: Elf in my Bed
I loved this story, the almost teasing way Spock had in letting Jim try to figure out what had happened and the tender, loving gift of himself to Jim, waiting for the moment he was sober and self-aware. And I thoroughly love it how in their joining there is no seduction, but a complete will of giving oneself to the other, of becoming whole in the beloved one.
Wow, thank you, lovely review!
Date: 12/26/2013 7:01 PM Title: Elf in my Bed
Loved the mystery you created, Kirk's efforts to unravel it, the way Spock hid the traces, and the fascinating twist in the resolution. Thanks for the satisfying ending!
Thank you for a very cheering review.
Date: 12/26/2013 9:08 AM Title: Elf in my Bed
I also enjoyed how you explained the meld. I also found the beginning humorous when Jim is trying so desperately to remember what happened last night. To the point of asking, or you might say begging to get the answers from either McCoy or the computer.
In the end, we see that our logical Vulcan, took a chance, and won big time.
Thank you so much!
Date: 12/25/2013 9:06 PM Title: Elf in my Bed
Nicely done! I love the intensity between them. And how sly of Spock to imply they'd had sex the previous night, without actually lying. :-)
Thank you. And he's the son of a diplomat, so I guess "sly" comes with the territory? LOL.
Date: 12/25/2013 8:09 PM Title: Elf in my Bed
Ahhh. What a lovely gift, this story. So much beautiful imagery and so much passion - but serene somehow. Really, just warm, soothing and satisfying. Thank you!
Wouldn't we all love to wake up with Spock in our beds on Christmas morning LOL? Thank you!
Date: 12/25/2013 10:58 AM Title: Elf in my Bed
Beautiful! I love thevway you describe the meld.
Thank you so much. Spent ages trying to get that right, and nice that someone noticed!
Date: 12/25/2013 10:24 AM Title: Elf in my Bed
The very best christmas present i have ever had. THANK YOU. <3
Absolutely superb; dazzling, marvellous, magnificent, wonderful, splendid, literary perfection from you - as always, and yet, you outdid yourself. Bravo! xoxo
(Nawwww) I'm gobsmacked by this review. Thank you, so, so much for such a complimentary assessment of my little story! You are very welcome!