Date: 08/16/2010 6:58 PM Title: None
That was sweet :) The fadeout on the sex was a bit abrupt, and there are a few moments Spock was too emo for my taste ("Oh, Jim!" with the sudden tight hug), but I enjoyed seeing them come together anyway. I also really liked that concept of yours that Kirk would have sought out Spock in dreams for adivce and managed to reach him. Thanks for sharing :).
Date: 01/22/2009 9:31 PM Title: None
A nice, short post-TMP story, the realisation of what they had missed while Spock was in Gol, the long embrace that led to... Well, what it led to was "+++++" ... a chapter separator! With the story resumed the next morning! Argh! A tease to be sure, but a lovely story, nevertheless. :-)
Author's Response: Late responding, but what the hell. I don't write sex scenes well, so I prefer to leave them to the reader's imagination...