Reviews For Subtle
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Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story as well. We do see them touch so often, and you describe everything brilliantly. 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: kitbaker123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

You got it!  I was well into story before I picked up on who the first POV was... for me!  I know you are 'testing the waters' now but... I'd love to read something longer from you!  Thanks for sharing! :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm afraid I don't have the attention span or the confidence to write anything longer - I was on pins and needles about writing this! I know how these two are - any OOC behavior grates on me and throws me out of the story - but writing them is so much harder than reading them! LOL

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's very sensual. Wow.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I was going for more sensual, less blatant eroticism. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Vulcan Lover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2013 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is Brilliant; Esp. as a 2nd story, believe me. Makes me seem rather inadequate to the task!

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you! You're so sweet! ^_^ I appreciate you answering so many of my challenges - I usually have to read the Archive on my phone, which doesn't allow me to leave any reviews, for some reason. Know that I do read every fic for every challenge and that I enjoy them a lot!

Reviewer: wapan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2013 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Your story is great, you are awesome. It brings light to a blizzard day. I shall keep it in mind to relax while driving to work. Looking forward for other stories from you. Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I was really very nervous to write this - Kirk and Spock have such specific voices as characters that making even a tiny mistake of OOCness can ruin the plausibility of a fic. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) I didn't intend for the story to be longer than 100 words, or to get as sexy as it did, but they demanded it turn ut this way. :)

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