Date: 01/05/2014 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well yes - who seduced whom? I very much liked that strange, touching declaration of complete availability they make to each other, even before knowing precisely where the other one is heading.
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by! :)
Date: 11/22/2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the intensity and honesty of the characters in this story. I always believed that they would get together as lovers, not because of pon farr or some other external influence, but because they both recognized that the time had come to take the next step in their relationship. This story is to me, how it might be in the "real" Star Trek universe.
Thanks! That you think it is somewhat realistic is a huge compliment. :)
Date: 11/16/2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I sure felt warm and fuzzy. A great beginning, where you show Jim's vulnerable side. We often do think that Jim isn't afraid of anything, but trying to seduce Spock scared him to death. Well, he didn't have to wait long to find out that his feelings mirrored his friend. Well done.
Thank you for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 11/15/2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. Especially the first part, with planning and nervousness and anticipation.
Thank you for the review! The inspiration came about the seduction itself, but then I found myself writing in the porn bit as well because it felt most natural to keep going.