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Reviewer: WriterPam4 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2017 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

"he played with Jim’s chest hair"

Jim, he does not have the chest hair!!! Faire Gaffe!!



Author's Response:

No. You're right. He doesn't, but, maybe, this is an aU, or, maybe, he hasn't waxed it this week yet, when the story takes place.

Reviewer: WeirdLittleStories Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Why does Spock say everything twice?  They have some echolalia spores? :-)

 

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ummm, hot. I sputtered with delight at this: "Spock guided Jim back to lean upon the bulkhead of the ship he so excellently Captained." In this story Kirk seems to be making love with Spock AND his ship. Perfect!



Author's Response:

You are so kind. Thanks!!

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hot. Jim teases Spock with a princess :-) "You don’t need any more princesses, Captain." Lol. Spock is better than every princesses... :-)

Author's Response:

Of course he is ; He's a prince among men xx

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