Date: 11/08/2013 8:19 PM Title: Prologue: Every Story Starts Somewhere
Okay, rereading the last chapters I get what you mean. Sorry about the little meltdown. It just it seems like the K/S fics I've been reading lately consist of Jim only really being with Spock because he can't be the one he really wants and it's just depressing and frustrating. Reading the last two chapters just reminded me of those fics. Sorry. As I said though, I enjoy your stories and this fic doesn't stop that.
Date: 11/08/2013 4:33 AM Title: Rising
Wow, my heart is just broken. I'm finding it hard to believe that Jim ever loved Spock with how fast he asked Kahn to marry him.
Sorry, I loved your other fics, but I just can't get past this one. Sorry.
Essentially and I know that it is hard to see it right now, but it was always part of the plan. Spock was Khan. If you have ever seen the beginning of the Search For Spock and how McCoy is totally acting like Spock after Spock made that transfer. That is what has been done to Khan. His soul being found was not finding Jim, it was realizing he was now one with the deceased Vulcan. It was Spock's way of ensuring Jim would always have him even after his death. And while it seemed like Jim had intended to cheat, that was not how I meant it to come across. I'm not the greatest writer so I guess the emotion didn't get across as well as I had hoped. He only wanted to dance with Khan and pretend. It was lust. His disguise was a way to hide it so he could defeat the feelings he did not understand. I'm sorry that you didn't like the end. It was rushed a bit because of the other fic I'm writing which I hope you will read.
Date: 11/04/2013 12:46 AM Title: Crawls Like A Worm
I just find it oddly funny that after khan has a total freak out due to his miscarriage, Spock's response is to kirk that they should move khan closer to their quarters for monitoring which will be convenient when khan is carrying the spirk baby. So inappropriate yet so spock
Date: 10/27/2013 12:12 AM Title: Cut My Teeth On Wedding Rings
Nothing certainly runs smoothly for the crew of the Enterprise! I'm rather amused that Starfleet thinks that it's Kahn who's getting into Kirk's pants. They are quite mistaken and hopefully things will clear up.