Date: 10/28/2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2 : What Began Then, Continues Now, and Forever
Yummy. I wonder if the set designeers of "City on the Edge" had any idea of the fan fiction they would inspire by piling all that equipment on the other bed in that room ...
Lord knows - in the sixties, there's a case to argue both yes and no!!
Date: 10/17/2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
"There may yet be a way" -- so perhaps the story will continue??
Wondering where they are in this scene -- where they are physically located? Presumably in private, but I had to go back and re-read with that in mind, because I was assuming this was right after the public ceremony.
No. This is in a room somewhere. Spock talks about the crowd in past tense. I did want to keep the end of the story open, in case I ever think of something - but I'm just not sure Jim could get used to the Captain and First Officer roles being switched, so I'm not sure a story based on that would work.
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