Date: 09/27/2013 10:40 AM Title: Chapter III
I am really am enjoying this story and look forward to finding out whats going to happen. ANd a personal side note-every time Carol says "Darling" I cringe! Just my personal feeling becasue I dont trust her as a character in geenral.
Keep up the great writing! Anxious to read the next chapter!
Date: 09/26/2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter III
Seems like it was probably a really, really bad idea to let Nebula stay on the ship ... I have a feeling Spock's memories are more reliable than the records Uhura accessed, which might have been falsified ... on the other hand, do regulations allow discrimination against Augments? Eager to see where this is going.