Date: 06/26/2015 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was very nicely done. It was interesting to see Spock from another Vulcan's point of view, and you did a nice job making Saavik seem young and naive without going over-the-top with that. And I enjoyed your gentle and considerate Spock.
Date: 04/12/2015 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love his gentle piece the few words sit with a lifetime behind them. They are so Spock Prime. We all have different TOS head cannon but I love Fics that have a quiet matter of fact easy about K/S which to me is the best fit with out two protagonists.
Date: 09/21/2013 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this :) The domesticity of it is engaging and I feel completely immersed in the situation you have created. And it is lovely to see Spock's alien nature from another vulcan's point of view - it gives us a fresh insight into his personality and characteristics. And above all him and Kirk and their little bolt-hole was very sweet. Lovely, thanks for posting :)
Date: 09/18/2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved your story. I loved that Spock's human side is described so as his Vulcan aspect. It is very interesting to see Spock from a Vulcan point of view. I loved that they spoke Vulcan and all subtilities to it. Congratulations on your writing. If you think about doing a 2nd part of this story I would say a big yes. Thank you for the good time I spent reading you.
Date: 09/17/2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Of all the stories I have read of Kirk and Spock, this one is my current favorite because it doesn't hit you over the head with them. There's a touch of human here and there, Spock uses the masculine term for lover, and Jim's jacket is on a chair. That's it. I LOVE IT. Besides Saavik being one of my favorite characters of course. And your Spock is so tender and so gentle. I love it. Please accept my congratulations on a story most excellently written. I'm keeping this.
Date: 09/17/2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this! I always like to see Spock or Jim through someone else's POV. I thought it was interesting that she has a "slight disdain" for some of his human mannerism. I suspect he may already know this, since he knows how Vulcan's often perceive him, and has finally made peace with it at this point in his life. He loves Jim and knows love and he's okay if he's not everybody's favorite person.
I loved that Jim's presence was all over the apartment in terms of both decor and Jim's jacket being present.
And I loved that there is a little bit of Amanda in Spock's mannerisms.