Date: 09/15/2013 7:12 AM Title: Main Story
That was great - and I will say I prefer the first ending to the alternative one. It just seems right that their conversation about the shape shifting would lead to a moment of greater emotional intimacy, rather than Kirk going out looking for more ladies, since we know he likes Spock. :)
Thank you, I appreciate your feedback! You're right. The rest of it didn't quite jive with me either.
Date: 09/15/2013 12:26 AM Title: Alternate Ending
This was wonderful as well but I did like the first version better. Something about Jim using Spock to pick up women made me want to smack him.
I did feel this story wasn't on par quality wise with my others - something was missing, or off, or something. Couldn't figure it out. That may have been one of the things. Thanks for your feedback!
Date: 09/15/2013 12:20 AM Title: Alternate Ending
I really enjoyed this. Always fun to try to get inside the mind of a truly alien being like a cat. LOL
Thank you, glad to hear it! :) Lol, I got this sudden image of Worf being turned into a cat. Somehow I don't think he'd be amused. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 09/14/2013 12:06 PM Title: Alternate Ending
Lovely story. The metaphor of Spock as a panther is deep in the collective subconscious of fandom, but this story fleshes it out in an appealing and surprisingly realistic manner.
Thank you! :) Glad you enjoyed and that it seemed realistic.