Date: 09/09/2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was great, the vivid descriptions, the atmosphere, the tension build up, the young Kirk slowly working up a head of steam... enough to take on a big boss in the name of justice. I like the conversation between Kirk and Spock at the railing as well, Kirk having to rephrase his wishes, saying I want to play chess with you rather than I want to play chess with an alien. It's nice to see that Spock also had a tendency to buck the brass in his own logical, passive-aggressive way--they are a matched set, those two. :) I really admire stories that portray a young Kirk and Spock convincingly. Thank you for posting.