Date: 06/15/2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh one of those Fics that cheers you on a rainy day and the last line was priceless. I love knowing!Uhura.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Nice to get a new review on a rainy day too.
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think the fade-to-black worked very well here. It gave gravity to the kiss by letting it be the culmination.
Tiny problem: It sounds like Spock has already removed his gaze from Jim's wet pants when he suddenly sees the turgid change. Either he has stopped looking or not. Or I suppose he could have caught a final glimpse but it doesn't sound like it.
Just the right amount of setup for the carnival (a cause, a place, a mode of organization) without getting bogged down into a chapter of details.
Author's Response:
Goodness - I thought I'd already responded to your review here, but my internet connection must have hiccuped. Perhaps I did get changes made necessary to fix the tiny problem though? (Because I am not seeing the issue now.) I do so appreciate your reviews. I found a tiny typo just not ('and' that should have been 'an') and fixed it.
Date: 11/14/2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
It was really good. It was in character and your grammar and punctuation were perfect. :)
Author's Response:
Oh, how sweet of you to say so! Thank you. I've learned a lot in a short time picking up writing for K/S and I am loving it. I especially like it when they are in character in other people's stories so it means a lot to know that I'm doing a good job of that too.
Date: 09/29/2013 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
That last line especially with that whole thing with Uhura and Scotty just made the story that much better!
Author's Response:
Oh - I'm so glad you thought so! I've always enjoyed Uhura's character and I think at heart in both universes she has a sympathetic heart. As a communications specialist, I was sure she would pick up on all that body language that we see.
Date: 09/06/2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very fun and full of cutes! :)
Author's Response:
I'm pleased you enjoyed it. They are kinda cute, aren't they.
[Report This]Date: 09/04/2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
I suspect it's going to be a rather loooong break. Loved it.
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you so much for commenting. I'm happy you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely marvelous! Thanks for sharing
Author's Response:
Oh thank you so very much for commenting. I'm happy you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lol. Sweet. I like it.
Author's Response:
Glad you got a laugh and liked it. And thank you so much for the comments! (((((commments)))))
Date: 09/03/2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yummy, sexy, and great fun! Fund-raising for victims of Orion slavers -- I love it! I hope they don't get busted for lobbying.
I hope you will write what happens after the fade to black ...
Author's Response:
Oh - thank you so much for commenting and picking out something you liked. I won't promise something after the fade to black (unless the muse starts pounding on me) because I tried starting something last night and it was ick, ick, ick - really lousy writing and even worse, really boring writing. So I turned up my nose at it, made faces and said, 'Fine - guess we're done here.'
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2013 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMFG my jaw literally dropped open when Spock grabbed Jim, because I thought for sure it was going to be the other way around. Wow wow wow!
(What Patricia said: SQUEEEE - thud).
<3
Author's Response:
Heehee! Yeah - this was lots of fun. It is one of my favorite things in the world to have Spock stay completely in character most of the time - and then hit me with a kapowie out of the blue.
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
The descriptions in this are mesmorizing. When you're describing Spock looking at Jim looking at Spock, I was held spellbound. Great word choices, and great technique. I'd be taking a break myself, there, boys! Yay for a terrific story!
Author's Response:
Yay for a lovely reviewer! Thank you so much. I am so very happy that part worked out well (switching POV is sometimes really problematic). I really appreciate your pointing out a particular part you liked.
Date: 09/03/2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, a bit of fluff but an enjoyable bit of fluff. Of course, it was inevitable that Jim would have to kiss Spock, right? Thanks.
Author's Response:
Absolutely! Thank you so much for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it!
Author's Response:
Oh - thank you so much. Gosh, it is so wonderful to get so many reads so quickly. I had such fun imagining them this way.
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Made me smile so much. This was delightful. I see them both leaving for that break together..ahem...and I knew Uhura was gonna collect a ton of credits. Excellent work....
Author's Response:
Oh thank you for the comments. Yes - don't you just want to follow them and see what they do next? I'll bet clever Jim manages to find an empty equipment tent somewhere...
Date: 09/03/2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was so sweet and hot!
Author's Response:
Ah - thank you! I'm glad you thought it was sweet. And hot. And thank you so much for commenting - I love it when people do that.
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very Sexy. Xoxo
Author's Response:
Oh - thank you so much for commenting! ((hugs))
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2013 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
sweet and sexy as hell.
Author's Response:
Aww - thank you! I could just see Spock standing calmly at that booth, collecting data. Boy - I'd get in line. Even for a hand-kiss.
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (thud)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Oh, I am having a rare old time tonight. Here' I'll pick you up off the floor, and then you pick me up off the floor, okay?
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely, positively PRICELESS!
~AKO
Author's Response:
Wow - that was FAST! My goodness. I'm so happy you liked it. I had fun with it. Thank you so much for commenting - that always makes my day!