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Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

Big smile.  I have been looking for a new chapter for several days, and your posting made my Friday afternoon.  Spock gets what he did to Kirk, huh?  Do I see a discussion in the future?  Looking forward to the next installment as usual.



Author's Response:

Hey.  You are very kind to keep reading and reviewing and I love that my chapter made your afternoon.  I am working on the next instalment.  I hope you're having a lovely weekend, TV and all.  Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Arcadii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2013 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm impressed with how you've taken these differing situations and used them to show Jim and Spock each others motivations and the paths back to each other.  I really like Sybok's character and hope that he will be proven not to be a run-of-the-mill 'snake oil salesman', but will instead be shown as the first explorer on the journey of Vulcan evolution.  I also hope that Peter's return to consciousness means that he's on the mend - Jim needs someone to shoot those hoops with.  Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

You are a very kind and loyal reviewer; thank you very much.  Expect you realise how much of a difference it makes.  It was a fun chapter to write so it's really great to hear that it's been enjoyed somewhere!  Have a lovely weekend.

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