Date: 06/06/2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
I read Surfacing, and I've searched you out and found this. I had to break off at the start of Chapter 3, just to tell you how wonderful your writing is. Thank you. Now I can get back to chapter 3!
In return, I am writing Surfacing and breaking away to thank you for being so kind. It's enormously appreciated. It makes the difference between writing and stopping writing, to be honest. Thank you for being so generous.
Date: 08/17/2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
I adore this already! Kirk's distrust is great - you have to imagine there'd be some suspcion and awkwardness, after Spock steals the ship, and so it's interesting to see that explored. And Sybok! There's plenty of potential conflict with the idea of Spock's crazy half-brother, and it's a shame the Final Frontier was so, uh, horrible. I'm always looking for good Sybok inclusions, though, so I love this already. Can't wait to read more!
Thank you so much. You are really kind and lovely and it's immensely appreciated. I hope it lives up to expectations!