Date: 08/25/2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hot! Riveting and very lust-inciting. Thank you for posting it! I'm not terribly comfortable with the reboot characters yet - my automatic thoughts go to TOS Spock and Kirk, and really, I do think they 'feel' like different characters. Very similar, but I think you've captured one of the big ones - there's huge antagonistic attraction going on in the reboot. Write more - it will be fun to see what you come up with.
THank you for such a high compliment and it means so much more from an author I enjoy reading so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I am working on something else, but I'm slower than molasses in January, so it will probably be a while. Thanks again for the stars and the review!
Date: 08/02/2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not dorky at all. It is great to write and huge fun to get reviews. I am not a great expert on Abrams universe but I thought your story was very well written. a high standard of prose. I am fascinated by your making Kirk the Dom, you do make it conVincing.
That's just how I see Kirk - always in command. Thank you for liking my story and taking the time to leave a comment!
Date: 08/02/2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Pamdizzle at work again spreading porny ideas throughout the universe! I liked your story and look forward to seeing more in the future.
Thank you very much - you're my very first review here and I know it sounds dorky, but I'm very excited about it!