Date: 09/02/2014 10:58 PM Title: Honey, I Shrunk the Doctor!
I ssume Khan is an artifact of the Shore Leave planet, but his presence sure is scary. Why has Kirk lost his Khan-powers? Why did Uhura shrink McCoy? This is more puzzling than the original Shore Leave episode (which was pretty puzzling!).
Date: 08/31/2014 12:09 AM Title: 50 Shades of Blue
Spock getting drunk is unusual enough for this to be an entertaining chapter -- you have written it so well -- and I get the feeling that he needs to get drunk in order to pull off the seduction of the Commander -- but I can't help but worry how "compromised" his faculties turn out to be.
Date: 08/14/2014 1:12 PM Title: Hasta La Vista
I have to admit I was a little relieved, too, when Kirk's Khan-powers returned. Wonder why McCoy's antidote was unsuccessful. Will we ever find out, now that McCoy has left the ship? Will Uhura and McCoy meet the same fate as Mitchell and Dehner? So many questions! Can't wait to find time to read the rest of this fascinating story.