Date: 08/12/2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 3: Poetic Justice of the E-mail Kind
I already reviewed this over on ffnet, but I'll leave one here too. :) I do feel bad for Uhura, she obivously has issues to deal with, but I do think Mccoy needs to get it in his head how much Spock means to her and realize that she does love him (Mccoy that is). This was such a wonderful chapter.
Date: 07/24/2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Awakening of Briar Rose with Pointy Ears
Is Spock bonded to Nyota now? Omg, I hope this doesn't turn into a Spock/Nyota/Kirk. Feel sorry for Bones! Just want to hug him.
I will tell you now that Spock did not accidentally "Vulcan marry" Nyota in the story and this will not end S/K/U (although, Nyota making Jim's fantasy come true as a 'Thank god your not dead gift' could happen). However, something did happen when Jim died that will have some long-term consequences. That will come out when the Vulcan Doctor arrives.
Date: 07/24/2013 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Awakening of Briar Rose with Pointy Ears
I read this version rather than the FF.net version just because I'm a bad little girl and I wanted the R rated version. This was good, but I'm not going to ask for more sex scenes because I don't write them myself (I always fade to black) and I wouldn't put something on you that I wouldn't do myself. You're doing a great job with this story. The flashback/nightmare Spock had was brilliant. I loved it. Just keep writing the story, that's all that matters to me.
Date: 07/16/2013 11:37 PM Title: Dear Jim, fuck you. Your angry friend who loves you, Nyota
Oh god, this is so heartbreaking and I just feel for them all! Jim and Spock just wrecked me with the goodbyes and now they're both in comas. I really want to see more about that. And poor Nyota, I feel so bad for her, she seems to feel so alonge. I love to see her get back together with Bones.