Date: 06/28/2014 3:48 AM Title: Not An Accident
Bummer, finally details about what's wrong w Kirk incl a punctured lung which actually IS serious and can be life threatening - yet Spock doesn't even show concern - the focus is again on Spock's little burn on his injury which should be insignificant - and HE'S the one getting all the concern from Kirk. Im sorry, I just like when writers write equally for all the characters instead of obviously writing mainly about their own favorite character - in this case, Spock. I promise this is last comment I will make in the subject, only sending positive reviews your way moving fwd!
Date: 06/28/2014 3:23 AM Title: Hand Job
Dang, finally a bad injury to Kirk yet still not a bit of detail abt his injury and it's kind of downplayed, yet Spocks small hand burn is over dramatized. I don' t at all mean this as flame, I just wish there was equal detail on Kirks injuries like there are to Spock's - it's just more realistic too. Thx for sharing your writing though, still a good story.
Date: 06/28/2014 12:51 AM Title: Birthday Cards
Love this story though I am just a bit lost (confused) at times but only because it's such a complicated storyline which is not a bad thing. I was bummed in this chapter and the previous one (Crash) cz it seemed that Kirk was (or should have been) much more injured than Spock since he had a head injury and also went through the screen which I doubt it easily breakable, but then his injuries weren't even mentioned though Spocks were pointed out every few minutes. I just kept waiting to see what damage had been done to the Captain. Hopefully the next chapter will have that. :-)
Date: 12/16/2013 5:10 PM Title: Like a Lorry Full of Bricks
Although this is still very painful, at least they are both alive and there is hope for the future, I do hope Kirk's memory loss is temporary. since obviously he will not be able to command in that condition. Eagerly waiting for more.
Date: 10/15/2013 3:43 AM Title: Sweet Perfume
Just as you wallow in the fluff completely forgetting the fic you left last night you hit the last linrealisation s lift hangerDuded the cat survive? Need an update soon. Spocks TMP line describes the events, I should have known. Assuming that this is Sector 31, always possible that it is not knowing your penchant for surprising us.
Date: 10/04/2013 5:12 PM Title: A Fickle but Pleasing Creature
Oh my goodness. You left us with TWO cliffhangers. I do hope the next instalment is posted soon.
"Mary's minge" is the most creative expletive I've read in a long time. I had to look it up.
lol minge is a British slang word that was popular when I was about 9 and only really lingers on in Scotland from what I can tell ;)
Date: 10/04/2013 8:52 AM Title: A Fickle but Pleasing Creature
Conspiracy theory to match all theories. How deep does this treacherous organisation go what could be the justification. What are they defending? Or is it an attack? Just as things look quiet the whole story is blown wide open again.